The Essential Writer Review of The Long Body That Connects Us All

The Long Body That Connects Us All by Rich Marcello

Fathers and sons have always shared a powerful and sometimes difficult bond. When to speak, when to hold still, when to love, when to let go.

Rich Marcello, In a marvelous new collection of extraordinary verse, drinks deeply from this well as he channels the thoughts and feelings of every father for his son.

“His face, sunlit, reminds me of a time when I was young / when I convinced myself all the world was dark / when the corner into which I was painted seemed drawn by others./ I want to tell him all of this. Tell him it will be okay. / Tell him he will find his way out of the corner one step at a time / even though some will be false. / But I’ve lived long enough to know he can’t hear me now. / So, instead, I pray forgiveness washes over him instead of sunlight.”

And, of time shared with a beloved grandfather:

“Shiny quarters given your workday suits and ties even on the weekends / the fights on the old radio in the basement / the cherry trees in full bloom / the Jersey shore strawberries / our long talks over football / I was the long-awaited grandson, endeared by order and substitution / the son never to come. / A circle in a square / Hair always a little too long / Values a little too left, I often yielded back then, / I thought out of respect but now I know out of descent. / You taught me first that love amidst difference / like hydrogen on the sun fusing into helium / lights generations.”

And, now and then through the years, when in deepest self-doubt, the son parents the father:

“Sometimes, when I’m dark like now, you visit / hands pocketed and smile worn calm / Without a word, you remind me of how you believed in me before I did / of how father is a name that can apply to anyone / of how a brief blush of peace, of forgiveness, can come when least expected.”

This lyrical collection transcends description, doing what all good poetry does, shining a soft light on often-unexpressed feelings. Marcello’s superb writing flows effortlessly (though all poets know that’s not so), and captures as well the long love of a married couple with years of friendship between them.

“Today persistent snow creates a white ceiling / and swirling walls around us as we walk through the morning. / Mostly we walk in silence, aware we’re connected to some larger radiant web / to some ageless dance, ubiquitous on days like today…/ At home, clothes fall off. / Face to face, we tremble as we kiss / in a way that can only happen after years of walking.”

Five-plus stars doesn’t seem like enough for this glimpse into a good man’s soul. But it’s all we have to bestow on The Long Body That Connects Us AllOrder a trade paperback version of this thought-provoking work. You’ll want to read and re-read it again and again.


The Beauty of the Fall Wins 2017 Award for Best General Contemporary Fiction

Hi All,
I’m happy to report that The Beauty of the Fall won the #RBRT 20117 Book Award for General Contemporary Fiction last night. A big thank you to all of you who voted. You can see all of the award winners by clicking on the link below.
I hope you all have a wonderful holiday.
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Soul Star Mist in the Azorian Sky


Back in April, my dearest friend, Donna Anctil, passed away after a long struggle with an illness. Since her death, I’d been struggling with a meaningful way to say goodbye, only recently settling on this series of six poems as a tribute and a ritual. Six because the number symbolizes seeing, and over twenty years, if nothing else, Donna and I learned to see each other clearly, knowing full well the impossibility of seeing another human being completely. Each day, I published one of the poems and also stacked six stones in my garden in memory of Donna. Next year, the last of these poems will be published in my collection of poetry, The Long Body That Connects Us All. The collection is dedicated to her.




Blurb for The Long Body That Connects Us All

The Long Body That Connects Us All


Rich Marcello

Provocative and profound, Rich Marcello’s poems are compact but expansive, filled with music as seductive as their ideas, and focused mostly on how to be a good man. This is a collection of deep passion and wisdom for fathers, husbands, and sons, but also for mothers, wives, and daughters, many who began with a longing for the things they were taught to desire by their forefathers, only to later discover a different path, one lit by loss and welcoming of the vulnerable, one made of the long body that connects us all.

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Fiction Essentials Class this Fall


Fiction Essentials

Ten-Week Course with Rich Marcello 

Wednesdays, September 13 – November 15, 2017

6:00 – 9:00 p.m., The Parlor, The First Church, Lancaster


This three-hour, introductory class will be divided into two sections. In the first half, we’ll explore different aspects of the craft of fiction, as detailed below. In the second half, we’ll focus on scenes written by the students and provide positive, constructive feedback on how each author might develop his or her work.


Week One: “The Anatomy of a Scene”

Week Two: “The Fictive Dream”

Week Three: Point of View, Voice, and Time

Week Four: Plot, Tension, and Raising the Stakes

Week Five: Characters

Week Six: The First and Last Chapter

Week Seven: Dialogue versus Narrative Summary

Week Eight: How to Build a World

Week Nine: Common Issues

Week Ten: Putting It All Together


Prerequisites: This class is designed for active, beginning writers who want to hone their craft. Each student must submit a sample of his or her writing, preferably a scene, no more than 10, double-spaced pages by September 1, 2017, and be prepared to write, share work and provide feedback for fellow participants. Ten-week course fee: $150.00. Register at or contact us with questions at 7bridgewriterscollaborative@gmailcom. Deadline to register: September 1, 2017.


Rich Marcello Rich Marcello is a poet, songwriter, musician, and writer.  He is author of three novels, The Color of HomeThe Big Wide Calm, and the recently released The Beauty of the Fall, all published by Langdon Street Press. Previously, he enjoyed a career as a technology executive, managing several multi-billion dollar businesses for Fortune 500 companies. Faulkner Award winner Mark Spencer praised Rich’s latest novel, noting that “Few novels are as intelligent and relevant as The Beauty of the Fall. Almost none is as eloquent, compelling, heartbreaking, and ultimately, uplifting.”  Marcello has partnered with the Writers’ Collaborative since 2015.


The Writers’ Scrap Bin Review of TBOTF

Book Reviews: The Beauty of the Fall by Rich Marcello

Trigger Warning: This novel deals with abusive and controlling relationships, a grieving parent, and self-harm. If you or a loved one have suffered through an abusive/controlling relationship, the loss of a child, and/or self-harm, proceed with caution.

Grab some tissues for this one. Today I’m reviewing The Beauty of the Fall by Rich Marcello. Spiritual, inspirational, and modern, I haven’t been so emotionally affected by a book since Flowers for Algernon. In fact, Marcello’s book has affected me more, making me sad and hating certain people but also inspiring me and making me hopeful for the future.

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The Beauty of the Fall follows Dan Underlight, an engineer and co-founder of RadioRadio, as he copes with being fired and the lingering guilt and sorrow from the loss of his son. As he comes to grips with losing his job, Dan undergoes multiple life-altering events: he finds new love in poet and advocate for women’s rights Willow, embarks on a pilgrimage to Fortune 500 companies across the U.S., and initiates a startup directed at changing the world, ConversationWorks. Yet every time Dan’s life appears to get better, something goes wrong. Sometimes his troubles stem from forces outside of his control, and other times they result from his own self-destructive behavior. In both cases, the universe seems bent on thwarting Dan’s efforts—or, perhaps, it’s trying to teach him a lesson about life. With the help of friends, colleagues, his therapist Nessa, and the guiding spirit of his dead son, will Dan finally get and keep his life on track? Will he ever discover what it takes to make him feel genuinely happy and fulfilled?

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The Color of Home Review by

A really positive review of The Color of Home that captures exactly what I was trying to accomplish when I wrote the book a few years ago.

Friday, May 5, 2017

The Color of Home

I have to admit, I didn’t expect a lot from this one.  Not having an especially wide readership and because it wasn’t particularly gripping from the start.  Instead of grabbing hold of and pulling you in, this one takes your hand gently, guiding you into its center, meandering through the tale at a more comfortable, steady pace.  However, I was surprised and delighted to come upon what I feel are rare treasures within the concepts of this love story.  Ones worthy of more exploration and consideration.  Certainly like none other that I have read in others.

Within the first chapter, we meet Sassa and Nick.  These two go on to have a rather serious, emotionally deep romantic relationship spanning over the next one year.  Revealing some of the innermost depths of their hearts to one another during that time.  However, Sassa isn’t sure she is ready, nor certain that she believes in the concept of being tethered to one person for the next 50+ years of ones life.  Instead, feeling as though she still has much growth and exploration ahead of her, which she needs to be able to move forward in.

Growth and explorations that may involve certain parallel paths with Nicks, but in other instances which she imagines may require a forking off from one another (if remaining totally true to themselves).  So, despite loving him deeply and believing there is something poignant between them, she leaves.  But, not before first posing an interesting question.  This is where is gets interesting.

Both Sassa and Nick feel and acknowledge a resonating connection between them.  A sense of being home with each other.  Yet, Sassa is convinced there is more that both of them still need to do first.  Some of which would, if truly following their hearts, take them in opposite directions from one another.  She believes its important for each to continue venturing forth into self growth and discovery first.  That you cannot truly be ready as your best self and partner until you have grown in immense ways.  That one should live through a certain amount of varying experiences and explorations before making a commitment of such magnitude.

So, she poses to Nick the following thoughts and ideas:  might it be possible for the two of them to venture forth through life, down their own paths of discovery and growth, while remaining in sporadic touch (they agree to talk once a year) and still connected?  And even further, can they do this in honesty, openness and bravery with one another?  Keeping the possibility in mind of their ending up together romantically if their paths end up converging once again.  But also, that if it doesn’t work out in such a way, this is ok too.  But to go forth trusting in the universe.  To let go, both with the understanding and acknowledgment that a large part of compatibility, a huge part, is timing.


My Interview with Blogger and Writer L. Ryals

Author Interview: Rich Marcello

March 29, 2017


The Beauty of the Fall takes Readers on Intriguing Journey

In Rich Marcello’s new novel, The Beauty of the Fall, Dan Underlight, a divorced, workaholic technology executive, suffers lingering grief over the death of his ten-year- old son, Zack. When Dan’s longtime friend and boss fires Dan from RadioRadio, the company that he helped create, he crashes and isolates himself.

Willow, a poet and domestic violence survivor and advocate, helps Dan regain his footing. With her support, Dan ventures on a pilgrimage of sorts, visiting Fortune 500 companies to flesh out a software start-up idea.

When Dan returns home with a fully formed vision, he recruits the help of three former RadioRadio colleagues and starts Conversationworks, a company he believes will be at the vanguard of social change. Guided by Dan’s generative leadership, Conversationworks enjoys some early successes, but its existence is soon threatened on multiple fronts. Will Dan survive the ensuing corporate battles and realize the potential of his company? Or will he be defeated by his enemies and consumed by his grief?

This captivating, idea-driven novel appeals to readers who are interested in exploring a technology based solution to many of our current social problems, and to readers who are interested in father-son relationships, gender equality, and working through grief.


Rich is a poet, a songwriter and musician, a creative writing teacher, and the author of three novels, The Color of Home, The Big Wide Calm, and The Beauty of the Fall.

As anyone who has read Rich’s work can tell you, his books deal with life’s big questions: love, loss, creativity, community, aging, self-discovery.  His novels are rich with characters and ideas, crafted by a natural storyteller, with the eye and the ear of a poet.

For Rich, writing and art making is about connection, or as he says, about making a difference to a least one other person in the world, something he has clearly achieved many times over, both as an artist and a teacher.